First of all, sorry for all the updates
but I am getting so much valuable feedback that I am going to take advantage of it. Seriously, I've taken everything everyone has said to heart and as you can see, I am trying my best to correct the flaws in my scene. That said, I want to thank everyone for the amazing comments and as you can see, I need to do more with this render as I personally think I've really strayed from my original path...
Not a finished piece.
Scene rendered in Cinema 4D.
All models created by me in Cinema 4D.
used with permission from ~ DaliFlores